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What is in a color that makes,
it shine bright?

What is the difference between
dark, and light?

You say it's a contrast of bright's
and bolds. But I say it's a story
that's never been told.

You tell me a color I' ll tell you
a name. A name in which fits
that color just the same.

Wether dark or light, bright
or bold, this is the story that's
never been told.

For the color is not how you
preceive, but rather every
other color indeed. For
by your own eyes you've been
deceived.
©2005-2009 ~troubledteen16
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very different for me.. I have no clue like I said just one of those weird things :nod:
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Wow. Beautiful rhyme. Except for the last sentance in the fourth stanza, it flows very well. Nicely written.

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...the seeds of my insanity spread...
whoooo thats sweet lovely

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cant change the past going to die in the future fuck the middle and nothing matters in the end....So fucking pull the trigger!
thanks any idea's for the last sentance... things that could make it better?? I'm open hit me with you best shot :D lol

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
thanks kinds my dear sir.. I'm glad you liked it :nod:

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
I boaw to you and kiss your hand gently- it was my pleasure my lady

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cant change the past going to die in the future fuck the middle and nothing matters in the end....So fucking pull the trigger!
:blush: as I shall curtsy :)

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
so where to from here darling to the opera or the chappel or maybe even the that long over due strole down the beach.

okay okay I had no idea what to say after the curtsy but I thought this would be cool

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cant change the past going to die in the future fuck the middle and nothing matters in the end....So fucking pull the trigger!
the beach sounds nice, or broadway.. :)

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
a little candle light out on the beach or even better a camp fire cuddling up listening to the waves crashing on shore some ten or fifteen feet away

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cant change the past going to die in the future fuck the middle and nothing matters in the end....So fucking pull the trigger!

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