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A splintered piece of glass,
blood stained tears a fragile
soul caught up, lost, and tossed
about within the years.

Just another lost soul,
just a person you forgot.

Time ticks by for soon I know
I'll die, soon the memory of me
fades only a breif haunting shall
remain.

Just a person you once loved,
just a person who wasn't enough.

Just someone who wonders if you
ever cared, if you were ever there.
As I place the bullet in the gun, pull
the triger the end has come.
©2005-2008 ~troubledteen16
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a figureitive poem that speaks of the pain of feeling rejected and in the end the only way to stop the pain is to end it all..
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~gigighost:icongigighost: Dec 9, 2005, 9:19:53 AM
so melancholic...

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~Joyblack007:iconJoyblack007: Dec 12, 2005, 8:12:24 PM
I know how you feel. I'm sorry if you feel this way. If there's anything I can do let me know. :cling:

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~troubledteen16:icontroubledteen16: Dec 13, 2005, 9:19:24 AM
ya I know, it just kinda came to me.. I'm not really sure where from I guess maybe it's just something that says hidden deep within me..

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~troubledteen16:icontroubledteen16: Dec 13, 2005, 9:44:56 AM
It's ok really thanks though I find that I deal with things I guess much differently from others, writing is my only outlet other than that I just keep it all in. And it's not like I'd ever do anything like that, sometimes I just think about it. But I've come to realize that it doesn't matter if I'm happy or not most of the time this kinda stuff is all that comes out!

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
~Joyblack007:iconJoyblack007: Dec 13, 2005, 6:20:32 PM
Lol same here. Interesting how similar we are in our writing...

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~troubledteen16:icontroubledteen16: Dec 19, 2005, 12:48:48 PM
I guess I pull it from maybe even thingss that happened to me whenI was younger.. Idk just something there and that's just the way that it come's freely I mean sure ya I can right happy but I have to actually put some thought into it and it takes me all day whereas my not so happy poems take me a few mins..

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
~MaydayadyaM:iconMaydayadyaM: Feb 6, 2006, 5:51:30 PM
I suppose the feelings of loneliness and being uncared for hit us all at some times, nice poem.
~troubledteen16:icontroubledteen16: Oct 23, 2006, 6:58:26 PM
thanks I'm glad that you liked it.. Now that I'm getting back to you like 8 FREAKING months later sorry about that I've been disconected *stupid parents* lol but I'm back now and holy crap do I ever have alot of catching up to do.. and this sites kinds changed.. not alot I guess but I don'r know if I like it none the less..

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t: