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A splintered piece of glass,
blood stained tears a fragile
soul caught up, lost, and tossed
about within the years.

Just another lost soul,
just a person you forgot.

Time ticks by for soon I know
I'll die, soon the memory of me
fades only a breif haunting shall
remain.

Just a person you once loved,
just a person who wasn't enough.

Just someone who wonders if you
ever cared, if you were ever there.
As I place the bullet in the gun, pull
the triger the end has come.
©2005-2009 ~troubledteen16
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a figureitive poem that speaks of the pain of feeling rejected and in the end the only way to stop the pain is to end it all..
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so melancholic...

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"Infertility is Hereditary"
I know how you feel. I'm sorry if you feel this way. If there's anything I can do let me know. :cling:

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ya I know, it just kinda came to me.. I'm not really sure where from I guess maybe it's just something that says hidden deep within me..

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
It's ok really thanks though I find that I deal with things I guess much differently from others, writing is my only outlet other than that I just keep it all in. And it's not like I'd ever do anything like that, sometimes I just think about it. But I've come to realize that it doesn't matter if I'm happy or not most of the time this kinda stuff is all that comes out!

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
Lol same here. Interesting how similar we are in our writing...

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If you tell the truth you never have to remember anything.

Be enlightened. --->[link]
I guess I pull it from maybe even thingss that happened to me whenI was younger.. Idk just something there and that's just the way that it come's freely I mean sure ya I can right happy but I have to actually put some thought into it and it takes me all day whereas my not so happy poems take me a few mins..

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:
I suppose the feelings of loneliness and being uncared for hit us all at some times, nice poem.
thanks I'm glad that you liked it.. Now that I'm getting back to you like 8 FREAKING months later sorry about that I've been disconected *stupid parents* lol but I'm back now and holy crap do I ever have alot of catching up to do.. and this sites kinds changed.. not alot I guess but I don'r know if I like it none the less..

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:dance:Dance like no ones watching:dance:
:love:love like you've never been hurt :love:
:sing: Sing like no ones listening :sing:
:w00t: And live like heaven where on earth :w00t:

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